You’re characters ‘voice’ is really good. You have really
created the character of Tanya through your writing, making it really
believable.
You’ve been able to delve deeper into her personality and
portray thoughts and opinions, through the blog, that I’ve never noticed
before.
Try and include more photos and videos on your character
blog, make it more colourful and exciting even though the content is amazing J
-Hannah
Very good writing and use of words. Try and include more
photos and a links maybe.
The video link was really good.
-Iris
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