Thursday, 17 October 2013

What I thought of Punk Rock



Punk Rock surrounds 7 late-teens who are about to take their mocks.

I thought Punk Rock was a phenomenal play about relationships in school. It showed how some people only date other people in the hope that it'll make them get a better reputation; how sometimes people have to sacrifice being popular to be intelligent, and how some people cope with rejection in different ways.

It's not an ordinary play where the audience see a typical school, it's more special than that because it shows the 'un-typical' school life. Is a school shooting everyday life? It happens quite rarely so Punk Rock proves that it's unlike most plays. It stands out from the crowd.

On the other hand, I think it could've been a bit longer where everything was explained thoroughly, although the play did pretty well explaining considering it was a short play.

Overall, I am grateful that I was able to perform in this thought-provoking piece of theatre.

Research: School Shootings

School shootings:


Dunblane School Massacre: 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dunblane_school_massacre

The gunman, 43-year-old Thomas Hamilton entered the school armed with four handguns, shooting and killing sixteen children and one adult before committing suicide.


Columbine High School Massacre:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Columbine_High_School_massacre

Two senior students, Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold, murdered a total of 12 students and one teacher. They injured 24 additional students, with three other people being injured while attempting to escape the school. The pair then committed suicide.


Hungerford Massacre:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hungerford_massacre


The gunman, 27-year-old Michael Robert Ryan (b. 18 May 1960), armed with two semi-automatic rifles and a handgun, shot and killed sixteen people including his mother, and wounded fifteen others, then fatally shot himself.


Loughborough tenn terror accused 'asked teacher to choose gun'

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-leicestershire-24379618


A teenager accused of planning a series of bomb and gun attacks asked teacher which gun he would prefer to be shot with, a court has heard.

Simon Stephens





Simon Stephens


Simon Stephens is an English play-writer. His plays are performed, not only in the UK but, across Europe. He is now an 'Artistic Associate' at the Lyric Hammersmith. 

'Along with Dennis Kelly, he is one of the most performed English-lauguage writers in Germany.'

He is originally from Stockport (where Punk Rock is set) but he studied and graduated from the University Of York.  He was a member of a Scottish art punk band called 'Country Teasers'.

List of Simon Stephens' plays (taken from Wikipedia):



Awards (Taken from Wikipedia):




Last Night's Performance



Last night was our first REAL performance in front of an audience of our parents. It was a nerve-wracking time for the entire cast as we saw our parents file in, take their seats and become ‘the house’ (audience).

As the performance went on, there were a few people who forgot their lines however they made it work with the scene, trying not to fail the scene. The whole cast supported each other and attempted to help those people out.
On the sidelines (offstage), we all had to watch the scenes while acting like our characters in semi-still positions, making sure that we weren’t drawing attention away from what was happening on stage; we tried to do minimum movement as possible, in the wings, while we weren’t performing.

In the lunch scene that I was in, it turned out very good and, even though I mixed up one of my lines, Iris and Yasmin were there to make sure that it was hardly noticeable. I think that the scene had obvious friendship-chemistry between us, which made the scene look even more believable! We used props, in the scene, to symbolize the food that they would’ve been eating at lunch however the majority of us didn’t eat or open anything so that it didn’t disrupt the scene or make it harder to act around; we just loosely fiddled with the items, as if we were about to eat them.

In the final scene, that I was also in, it rounded off the play in a brilliant way by showing why William was in a mental hospital and the group scream at the end really completed the play! I was very happy that I was able to get tears to come out of my eyes for the scene and that everyone was able to show brilliant emotion.

Overall, I think that Punk Rock was a very successful play for a first proper performance together.

Friday, 11 October 2013

Peer Editing Editing Questions



You’re characters ‘voice’ is really good. You have really created the character of Tanya through your writing, making it really believable.
You’ve been able to delve deeper into her personality and portray thoughts and opinions, through the blog, that I’ve never noticed before.
Try and include more photos and videos on your character blog, make it more colourful and exciting even though the content is amazing J
-Hannah



Very good writing and use of words. Try and include more photos and a links maybe.
The video link was really good.
-Iris    

Friday, 4 October 2013

Peer Editing Questions - Isaac and Finn



1.  What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?
I really like the diary of the character because it seems genuine.  There could be a bit more graphic work and pictures to show what kind of character she is
2.  Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?
No
3.  After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.
No
4.  Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.
No
5.  Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements handout?
Pretty much!

If not, which one or ones still need to be added?